-it was well planned
-it was easy and simple to understand what the article is going to be about.
-add interviews with comic/marvel fans to get a wide range of views from different people
i have given this idea some consideration and i believe it would be a good part for my online article, as people can read the views of a wide range of people and not just mine.
-include my own back story:
why I prefer marvel over other comic companies
how i got into comics and marvel
why i want to write an article helping people understand marvels avengers franchise.
this will help to give a deeper understanding into why i enjoy comics and why i prefer marvel. this can also help to convince people to read my article as there are more than on topic.
-maybe focus on just Marvel or Just DC as this helps it stop being bias
i thought this considered this comment and decided to just focus on Marvel as this makes my articles less bias and simpler.
the brainstorm is interesting and you have included some notes on feedback. this could be written more fully and annotated with your own thoughts on how you will move forward with the piece.
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